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![]() "I want to be a tart
with a heart" |
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| It pretty much started with
Jenny. I was telling her about my other westerns, and how
some of the characters were named after friends. "Ooh, can I be in one of your books ?" she pleaded. I said sure, and asked her what sort of character shed like me to use her name for. Jenny thought for a moment. "I wanna be a prostitute," she said brightly. "I want to be a tart with a heart." How could I refuse ?
Maybe its because the real Jenny is exceptionally tall, but I felt she should be more than an ordinary prostitute. I decided to make her a madam, and expanded the friends idea by asking various women I knew if I could use their names and descriptions for prostitutes in Jennys brothel. The six I asked all said yes, which says something about my friends. Their trust in me perhaps or something . When thinking of a setting for this story, I was inspired by a photograph of a mining town nestled between the sheer walls of a canyon. The town was Creede, in Colorado. I created my own version, called Motherlode, and started the story there.
The first couple of days were spent exploring the desert country. I saw tumbleweed tumbling, cacti growing wild, ate Navajo chicken stew and dumplings and marvelled at Monument Valley. I also discovered that some western restaurants have a remarkably casual attitude to locks, and indeed doors, on their toilet facilities. After the desert, came the mountains. I love railways and engines, especially steam engines, so I was keen to travel on the Durango-Silverton Railroad. Ron and Cathy were happy to accommodate my wishes, and so we set out on a two-day trip.
It had been sunny in Durango, but was snowing when we arrived up in Silverton. My first priority was to find somewhere selling warm coats ! After that was lunch at Handlebars, in a room so large that even a full-sized stuffed elk fitted in just fine with all the other stuffed animals and colourful clutter. I took the opportunity to try a buffalo burger, and enjoyed it. From Silverton, we drove along the spectacular Million Dollar Highway to the lovely town of Ouray, nestling in a bowl between soaring peaks. For the evening meal, we drove to the little town of Ridgeway, where some scenes of the John Wayne movie, True Grit were filmed. The painting that had been on the outer wall of a store in the movie, was now on the inside wall of our restaurant.
The other places referred to in the story are all to be found on the map: Animas Forks, Cement Creek, Slagle Basin. I like to be able to visualize an area where a story is set, and this map is a particular treasure to me. I just wish I could find similar ones for the other areas where I want to set stories. One of the great things about watching a western movie is that even if the story isnt up to much, you can always enjoy the scenery. Out west, the land itself is an important element of the story. When writing, I try to make the reader really aware of where the story is taking place. I want them to be down in the Big Bend of Texas, or on a Wyoming plain, or up in the crisp air of the San Juans. Some westerns Ive read just seem to happen in a generic South-West, which could be anywhere from California to Texas. With my own photos and memories to draw upon, I had the most wonderful setting for Two-Gun Trouble:
This time around, I knew more not only about the overall location of the story, I also had more information on Miss Jennys line of business. A couple of the books I got in America were particularly useful sources on prostitution in the Old West (writers have some strange books in their libraries). Id always visualized Miss Jennys place as being up-market, but now I could specify it as a parlour-house, with a dining-parlour, music and imported wines available. I wanted to keep much the same opening as before, but had to re-think who killed the prostitute and why. I developed the idea of someone trying to scare Jenny away from Motherlode, with the intention of buying her business cheaply. Once I had this in place, the rest of the story came together. Jonah got to play the gallant hero, protecting the damsel in distress, although in the big fight at the end, Jenny and her girls do a pretty fine job of looking after themselves. The story ends with Jonah riding away from Motherlode: The last farewell was for Jenny. Jonah stopped in front of her and smiled. "The handsomest manhunter in Colorado at your service, maam." "Only in Colorado?" Jenny teased. She gently touched a scab on his cheekbone where a shard of window glass had been embedded. "I hope this wont damage your beauty too much." "Im going to tell women that its a duelling scar," Jonah announced shamelessly. Hes not going very far though, and Im sure hes got more adventures waiting to happen. Ill be able to travel back to Colorado in my writing, and hopefully in reality too someday. And next time, Ill take a warm coat. |
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